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Taken this summer at the Dune de Bouctouche, during a trip.

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I wasn't really sure in what category to put this, so I put it in sky - it will have to do.

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:iconrichardknightly:
Yep the categories can be tricky at times! Love the sky though so a good choice!

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Thanks.

I'm not 100% happy with this photo I'll admit. I think that it's fairly obvious that there was " something there" that was worth photographing... but I don't think I pulled it off. The angles aren't right, or maybe the framing... but even now, I'm not sure what would have been the "right" way to shoot it.
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I do kind of know what you mean. I really agree there's something there, and I like what you've done, but it misses a couple of compositional tricks maybe?

As an idea, what about getting down low on that handrail in the foreground - it would create a really interesting lead-line as it zig-zags into the image. I also think the building on the left is distracting... the tower is interesting and wooden and really fits in with the deck and the natural landscape; the building is brick and boring and doesn't fit in. A low-ish view on the handrail that excludes the building might work really well...

Just a thought!

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October 19, 2008
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Aug 8, 2008, 4:20:55 PM

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